My focus group included 3 people that can be put into my
target audience. There was images of my 3 pages loaded up onto the phone that
the girl is holding and so they were all looking at the front cover page in
this image.
There were a few comments about the contents page not
matching the front cover page and the double page spread very well. I took this
on board and asked why? The answer to this was that the images on the 2 other
pages were black and white, but the images on the contents page weren’t. They
also commented on the fact that some of the fonts had been carried over from
the front cover to the double page spread and that there was also the same
fonts on the front cover and the contents page. They also liked the fact that
the pink colour had been carried across all 3 pages to make them link together
more.
However they didn’t like the fact that I had photoshoped the
artist so that she was in black and white but had “fake blue eyes and fake pink
lips”.

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